Unholy one, the Necromancer

This may sound weird but imma post a hero for myself? Tell me if he's too good, or he's like stupid idea, or something else.

Name: Unholy One
Class: Undead/Necromancer
Model: Druid tinted blackish, making him look darker
Skilz:

Carrion:Summons an army of undead creatures that last for a short time.

Deathbringer: Whenever the Unholy One approaches people decreases there armor, 1 X (Level of Abiltiy).

Soul Rip: The Unholy One steals the soul of the chosen unit, trying to find its way back the body, the body is completly standing still, and deals 50 X (Level of Ability and stuns for 1 X (Level of Ability).

Ultimate:Metamorphis: The Unholy One targets a chosen unit then they get corrupted converting them into a giant demon to fight for the Unholy One, the demon lasts for a short time.

Please critique...

Hey, you stole my method of creating heroes, you even tried spelling skillz the same as me. P <--Thumbs down

On the other hand... the hero is unique, but is he only for you to use? Or is he available to everyone?

He is avialabe for everyone.
lol

Ok that works, but, I think he's a little weak, if he is a spell caster, why would he need a armor debuff?

Make the soul rip do stun = 1/2 of lvl of spell. 5 second stun is rigged....

becuase he's like that guy on dota (which is our rival) Nevermore er sumthing, he's a spell guy (im pretty sure) and he has a spell like that.

Meh, I just think it kind of ruins the purpose of a spellcaster

It makes his enemies easier to kill

But if he is a spellcaster, his enemy's armor won't matter, spells ignore armor.

Go to the chat box

I think soul rip should stun for 1/2 of the spell's level.

Yeah, make the stun shorter.

i agree debuff armor woudln't work out
also agree with the stun being shorter

ok

Good hero, he's yours, probably gonna be in the game eH? lol

Well of course lol

wouldn't doubt it

lol